th graph below gives information differences in clothing exports from three different countries.

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graph provides information about

differences

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the differences

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cloting

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clothing

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exports from

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Japan

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and

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, from 1999 to 2003.

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, both

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had some fluctuations and declined over the cycle ,

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experienced a steady increase throughout the years ,

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clothing

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lowest rate and it

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other hand,

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surpassed

Japan

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becoming the highest ratio by th end. In 1999,

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rate started at 0% , after that it rose significantly reaching approximately 800%in 2000 exceeding both other countries,

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it reached a peak at almost 900% in 2001.

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it fell

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to almost 400% in 2003 ,

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Japan

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rate

decreaced

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gradually to approximately 400% in 2003 ,

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Colombia

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percentage increased

qucikly

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quickly

hitting about 600% in 2003.

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th graph below gives information differences in clothing exports from three different countries.

In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message ?

It is important for everyone , including young people , to save money for their future. To what extent do you agree of disagree with this statement?

In the developed world, average life expectency is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society ? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of aging population.

People who do not use social media networks will always fall behind in career development opportunities. To what extent do you feel that this is an accurate and important prediction? (Social media networks = messaging and information exchange systems such as Facebook and Twitter.)

Question: Traffic congestion in many cities in the world makes it difficult for people to get in and out of cities, and to move around inside them. Why do you think this is happening? What could be done to solve these problems?