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Writing Samples
Band 3

You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost. You do NOT need to write any address.

Dear my friend. I
was seen
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saw
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 the
information
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 on the internet, there
are
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is
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 a seminar
work
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working
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 in the
united
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United
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state
Fix the agreement mistake
States
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 of
UK
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the UK
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, from that
information
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 I would like to
partisipate
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participate
the
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in the
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 seminar because
i
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I
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needed
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need
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 the job very much.
i
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I
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 was missing my phone probably, so that way
i
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I
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 came to late to get the informations can you help me to get the perfect
information
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 like what the seminar
wold
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would
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like
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be like
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 and what does the data needed.
then
Linking Words
my be
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maybe
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 you can explain
me
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to me
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about
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apply
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how many
prgram
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programmes
 there
, and
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are, and
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 how
mach
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much
 the
accomodation
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accommodation
 to get some cost there. directly if you are getting the
information
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 you cant contact me on 087743287835.
Fathemore
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Furthermore
 I will be very
happyness
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happy
 if you
are
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apply
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directly invite me to
comes
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come
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. because
i
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I
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 was the
olders
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older
 in my
hause
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house
, so that way I
need
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needed
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 it.

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coherence and cohesion
Use clearer sentences and check your spelling.
coherence and cohesion
Make sure your letter has a clear opening and closing.
task achievement
Answer all parts of the task to improve your response.
task achievement
Use a more polite and professional tone.
task achievement
You've expressed your need to join the seminar, which is important.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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