In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
In the future, all vehicles will be autonomous. Passengers will be the only people inside them. I believe businesses could cut costs by using
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advantage far outweighs any potential disadvantages. One downside of self-driving Linking Words
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might be that they could lead to large employment losses. Nowadays, in many countries, a great number of people are making a living by driving, be they truckers, bus Use synonyms
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could mean that these huge salary payments could be eliminated. I think Use synonyms
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could create a great advantage for society as a whole because companies could devote the money they save on Linking Words
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self-driving vehicles would result in many job losses, I believe Linking Words
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downside is greatly outweighed by the upside that these vehicles could help businesses save operating costs.Linking Words
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task achievement
Expand on your ideas for a stronger argument. Explain how re-skilling can work in practice.
coherence and cohesion
Make sure your ideas are linked clearly. Use connectors like 'firstly', 'secondly', and 'finally'.
coherence and cohesion
Your conclusion summarizes your main points well.
task achievement
You provided a relevant example with the UPS company, which adds strength to your argument.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite