Some people say that the Internet will soon become the preferred method of delivery of the news and information, causing the newspapers and magazines to gradually disappear. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and include examples from your knowledge or experience. I'm

It is widely believed that in future the press and the
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agencies will pass information to the public through
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the internet
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internet
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,
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leading to
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of
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of news
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as
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, magazines and pamphlets.
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my perspective, I believe that the trend of
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internet
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will rise and
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organisations will avoid printing current affairs on
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.
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,
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may affect aged populations who rely on
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. To commence with, in
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contemporary era, people are over dependent on
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, opera and other web browsers to get updated about
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going on in the nation and the world. The reason for
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trend is convenience, as individuals can easily access the
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anywhere and anytime. In terms of
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, the interested population have to wait for the
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to arrive
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doorstep or they have to travel to get
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from convenience stores.
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involve
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travelling time and sometimes discomfort for people who live in remote areas
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of limited
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amenities
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, taking into consideration these drawbacks of
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of information, the agencies prefer to post affairs and data on the
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so that it can be accessed easily by the consumers.
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, the cost involved in the printing,
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material to make
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publications
and
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transportation
of the items is higher than online platforms.
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encourages
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news providers to prefer online content.
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, for the publication of
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, the money paid to the writers, companies providing raw
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and distribution through various chains involve
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amount of income.
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, for online publications, though there would be
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involved in terms of writers and subscriptions
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websites,
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would be much lower than printing papers.
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due to excess
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use of
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the internet
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and the convenience
in
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navigating information online
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cost analysis may
rise
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raise
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the flow of affairs online rather than
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paper
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form.
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,
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trend should be analysed by
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taking into consideration the people who are not educated enough to use
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internet
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and the populations who read
newspapers
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as their hobby.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Internet
  • news
  • information
  • newspapers
  • magazines
  • delivery
  • popular
  • people
  • access
  • update
  • example
  • events
  • social media
  • share
  • spread
  • quickly
  • traditional
  • online
  • adapt
  • digital
  • age
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