The table below shows the Japanese population by different age groups from 1970 to 2040.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table below shows the Japanese population by different age groups from 1970 to 2040.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line chart illustrates the various age classes in Japanese during the period from 1970 to 2040 .

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while

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the Japanese diverse age groups exhibited different tenders over a given period , one followed an upward trajectory ,

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the other one showed a decline .

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, the rates of increase and decrease varied between them . As the graph shows, the number of Japanese population 65 age started at smaller petition in 1990. , there was a rise generally

at the end

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of the period reaching almost one-third by 2024 .

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, the class of 0 -14 began at 30 per cent, had some fluctuations from 1970 to 1990 ,after that declined to 10 by 2040. Regarding the comment at sightly two threads 25-64 by 19960. In 19970 ,making it the most significant category reached 70 per cent ,

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a massive drop to under 60 per cent in 2020.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

154 words

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