The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year, 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year, 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year, 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts represent the amount of
revenue
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and expenditure for a children’s charity in the USA in 2016.
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, it can be clearly seen that donated food contributed to the majority of the income,
whereas
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the most money spent was on program services for the year. The total money received exceeded the outgoings. In detail, the donated food provided most of the
revenue
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for the charity, at 86.6%.
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, with regards to expenditure, one category, program services accounted for nearly all the outgoings, at 95.8%. The other categories were much smaller gainings. The second largest
revenue
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source was community contributions which brought in 10.4% of total turnover, and
this
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was followed by program
revenue
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, at 2.2%. Investment income, government grants, and other income were very small sources of
revenue
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, accounting for only 0.8% combined. There were only two other items under money spent, which are fundraising and management and general, accounting for 2.6% and 1.6% respectively. The total turnover for the children’s charity was $53,561,580, which was just enough to cover the expenses of $53,224,896.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words revenue with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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