It is a natural process that animal species such as dinosaurs become extinct. There is no reason for people to prevent this from happening. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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extinction

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, like dinosaurs, does come from natural selection.

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something that should be helped prevented. I believe as modern people, we have valid reasons to preserve the diversity of animals as they can protect the

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chain

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, and that every

species

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serves a purpose of their own in the environment. Animals

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a big role in the

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. The presence and non-existent of certain

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determine the balance of the

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chain

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. To illustrate

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, a case in a paddy field population, where the snakes are caught by humans and it

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become

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extinct so people are no longer afraid of getting bitten.

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,

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would eliminate the predators of rats living there, causing its population to increase massively.

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would

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increase the demand

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source

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of

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for the rats to eat. And so they would eat all the paddies and there would be nothing left. Another reason is that every

species

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has its own roles and benefits

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the environment even if it is indirectly.

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, bees are crucial for

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world. Even though they

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not play a big role in the

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directly, they do help the pollination of the flowers.

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is a huge factor in all the other

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chains as it is the reason for most of the plants to reproduce. And by reproducing, the plants can continue to exist, and become the source of life to other

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, including us humans.

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it is given that

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will go through natural selection and can become extinct, we still need to protect

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from happening as they are important for our life on

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earth, whether it is to keep a

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food

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, or indirectly keeping it exist

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with.