Many countries use fossil fuels (coal, oil, natural gas) as the main source of energy. However, in some countries the use of the alternative sources of energy (wind energy and solar energy) is encouraged. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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have been using fossil
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as the primary source of
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other
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are encouraging the
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of renewable
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of
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as wind
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and solar
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. I strongly disagree with the concept that
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must only depend on their preferred form of
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as both have their benefits and drawbacks
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and will discuss that using both
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together can generate
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much greater output. On the one side, some
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prefer the
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of fossil
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as the main source of
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is because it generates a large
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of
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compared to the
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sources
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, and can boost many facilities.
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, In India, there exist many fossil fuel power stations that generate
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enough to light the cities and various infrastructures.
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the efficiency of
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produced is large, fossil
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have the drawbacks of emitting harmful gases and being less abundant. As fossil
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are considered a non-renewable form of
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, their overuse can easily deprive it of nature and
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, generate toxic gases harmful to the
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, which are not seen with the
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of
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sources
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. On the other side,
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abundantly
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renewable
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of
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is because, unlike fossil
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, they largely exist in nature and
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do not produce any remnants that threaten the
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, Mulaperiar Dam, a widely known site in India, generates a surplus
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of
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, which is used to supply electricity to local communities.
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, the output of
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sources
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is lesser than fossil
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countries
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solely depending on
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, won't be helpful for their economy.
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, I believe that
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must
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hybrid
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that
use
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fossil
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and renewable
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so they produce a great
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of
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it protects
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the
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. In conclusion, The
use
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of fossil
fuels
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by some
countries
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can produce a large
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of
energy
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but its overuse could threaten the
environment
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, which is quite the opposite for
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that encourage the
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of
alternative
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sources
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of
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. The balanced
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of both
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of
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must rather be the approach for all
countries
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.

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Task Response
Make sure to have a clear opinion in the introduction, as this helps guide your argument throughout the essay.
Coherence and Cohesion
Try to use clearer topic sentences at the beginning of each paragraph to guide the reader through your points.
Task Response
Use more varied examples from different countries or contexts to strengthen your argument and show a wider perspective.
Content
You presented both sides of the argument well, showing an understanding of the benefits and drawbacks of energy sources.
Content
Your conclusion summarizes the arguments effectively, reinforcing your main point.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • sustainable
  • renewable energy
  • non-renewable resources
  • carbon footprint
  • greenhouse gases
  • energy independence
  • climate change
  • environmental impact
  • infrastructural development
  • technological innovation
  • economic disruption
  • fossil fuel depletion
  • energy transition
  • consistency and reliability
  • wildlife habitat
  • natural landscapes
  • solar panels
  • wind turbines
  • energy consumption
  • ecological balance
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