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The given diagrams illustrate the process of producing nuclear power

The given diagrams illustrate the process of producing nuclear power
The given diagrams illustrate the process of producing nuclear power.
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, mined uranium must be converted and enriched before generating to make electricity, it is later removed and stored,
while
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 others are reprocessed and reused.
To begin
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 ,in order to convert and enrich to produce u-235, Uranium must be mined from the earth.
After
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this
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 figure, it generators as the way to make electricity until after 4 years when fuel becomes spent and later removed.
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 the dis-reprocessed fuel was stored in containers and later buried. In terms of the fuel which was able to be re-processed.After the 4 years period, it has been reused and against
gereatored
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restored
 into electricity,

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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