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The graph below shows the consumption of 3 spreads from 1981 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the consumption of 3 spreads from 1981 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the consumption of Margarine, Low fat & reduced spreads and Butter from 1981 to 2007.
Overall
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it is clear that
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 all three spreads have started from different amounts of
grams
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.
Additionally
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,
at the end
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 of the period they all had a similar number of
grams
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. In 1981, the amount of butter was significantly higher than margarine, starting with about 140
grams
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.
This
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 figure increased sharply to 160 in 1986. After that, the amount decreased dramatically to 100
grams
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 in 1991,
then
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 dropped consistently to approximately 70
grams
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 in 1996 and to about 50
grams
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 in 2007.
However
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, margarine began with around 95
grams
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,
then
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 decreased to 80
grams
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 by 1986. The number of
grams
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 climbed highly to 100 by 1991,
then
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 levelled off until 1996. The figure experienced a sharp fall to 80 in 2001 and to 40 in 2007.
While
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 low fat and reduced spreads only appeared in 1996, they surged quickly from about 10
grams
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 to 80
grams
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 in 2001. After that, it saw a slight decrease to roughly 70
grams
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 in 2007.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words grams with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amounts" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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