The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart provides key information about the
sales
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of five different brands of phones from 2009 to 2013. The units are measured in millions
overall
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, it is clear from the graph that in 2009 majorities of the
sales
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was Nokia.
In addition
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, Samsung increased significantly in 2013 ,and almost 450
million
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.
Whereas
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, ZTE has the lowest
sales
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among all companies.
According to
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what is shown, Nokia was the dominant company in 2009 and 2011 and
then
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they declined significantly in 2013.
However
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, Samsung was the opposite they started slowly and
then
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increased slightly year by year to become the highest
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in 2013 In teams of other brands, Apple is rising slowly to reach higher
sales
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in 2019 with nearly 150
million
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sold . For ZTE, they have been almost the same during the years with less than 100
million
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sold.
On the other hand
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, LG started to decrease in 2009 until they reached 50
million
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sold in 2013

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slowly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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