The diagram below shows the life cycle of the Monarch butterfly. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the life cycle of the Monarch butterfly. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the life cycle of the Monarch butterfly. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagrams illustrate the Monarch butterfly"
s
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's
life cycle.
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, In order to become an adult, it first begins in the egg
stage
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before moving to the larval
stage
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,
after
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this
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firguer
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stage
it is in the pupal
stage
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until it later attends the adult step .
To begin
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, the eggs on milkweed will become newly hatched larvae after 14
days
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day
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period,
then
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it must caterpillar
o
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or
milkweed.
Then
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it attached
of
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to
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larva
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the larva
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before moving to the chrysalis
stage
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as the way to gain nutrients and prepare for the next steps for over 10 days.
Subsequently
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, the chrysalis emerged as an adult,
after
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this
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stage
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, it migrated to the south for 6 months and
then
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against moves to the north. At
this
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time of the process, it will find another gender in order to mate and begin the egg-laying process and
then
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continue the new life cycle one more.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "after this".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words stage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • life cycle
  • Monarch butterfly
  • eggs
  • milkweed plants
  • larvae
  • caterpillars
  • feed
  • chrysalis
  • pupa
  • metamorphosis
  • emerge
  • adult butterfly
  • repeat
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