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Your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied. He/she would like your advice about finding a place to live. Writr an letter to your friend. In your letter Describe where you would lived when you were a student at the university. Recommend the best what from him/her to look accommodation. Warn him/her of mistakes students make when choosing accommodation.

Dear Sam , I hope
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 letter finds you in radiant
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health and best spirits. I am glad to know about the new beginning of your life that you got
an admission
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in
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 the prestigious Cambridge University and I had a great time
in
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 the same premises when I was a student. I used to live in an apartment which was located at Kabir Park , it was within
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walking distance from the University
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 was the best part of
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 accommodation .
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, my room had all the amenities like
A.C
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A.C.
,
private
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a private
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 washroom and
shared
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a shared
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 kitchen with my two friends. In my opinion,you should look for a serene and gentle owner who will guide you in
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convoluted situations . If your pocket allows you,
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 go for a private room
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 way you can concentrate on your studies without any disturbance.
Majority
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 of the scholars choose shared
room
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 to save money but
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 is the biggest mistake and I want you to refrain from it .
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, always look for a parking facility for your bike
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, it would be difficult for you to commute. Do not hesitate if you need any assistance from my side .I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours truly Harvi

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coherence and cohesion
Make sure to clearly separate the ideas into paragraphs. Each paragraph should have one main idea to improve clarity.
coherence and cohesion
Try to keep your sentences clear and straightforward to make your points more understandable.
task achievement
Ensure you address all parts of the task explicitly, such as giving a clear warning about mistakes students commonly make.
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You included personal experience, which makes your advice more relatable and engaging.
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The tone of your letter is friendly and supportive, which is very nice for a letter to a friend.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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