The table below provides information about the three largest Pacific islands. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below provides information about the three largest Pacific islands. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table below provides information about the three largest Pacific islands. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table presents data regarding the three main Pacific islands
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relation to their geographic size and
population
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. The largest
Island
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is New
Guinea
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with an area of 787,753km2.
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is more than three times greater than Honshu, and more than five times greater than Sulawesi which is the smallest
island
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with an area of
147,600km2
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147,600 km2
. The
island
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of New
Guinea
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is under the jurisdiction of two countries
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the islands of Honshu and Sulawesi are both under
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of a single country
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. In terms of
population
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density
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, the
island
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of Honshu records a
density
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of 451.8 which is more than quadrable that of Sulawesi at 105.7 and approaching fifty times that of New
Guinea
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which has the lowest
density
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of 9.5. Compared to New
Guinea
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, Sulawesi’s
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is slightly more than twenty
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larger, but its
population
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density
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is more than tenfold.
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, the area of the three Pacific islands varies greatly and there does not appear to be a clear correlation between
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size and
density
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words population, island, guinea, density with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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