Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you got off the plane, you left a bag there. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter explain what has happened describe the bag and its contents say what you would like them to do about this problem
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter regarding a Linking Words
bag
that I Use synonyms
have
forgot Unnecessary verb
apply
in
the flight (546) from Toronto to London, yesterday by mistake.
Until I got to the hotel, I did not realize that my Change preposition
on
bag
was left on the plane. Use synonyms
Usually
I only carry my laptop Add a comma
Usually,
bag
on flights, Use synonyms
however
, Linking Words
this
time I was Linking Words
carring
my gaming console Correct your spelling
carrying
caring
aswell
. Correct your spelling
as well
Also
, it was a long Linking Words
six hour
journey. I Add a hyphen
six-hour
fall
asleep till the time plane landed Wrong verb form
fell
to
London. Change preposition
in
Thereafter
, all the flight attendees Linking Words
stareted
leaving the plane in Correct your spelling
started
rush
, Correct article usage
a rush
so
did Correct word choice
and so
i
, and Change the capitalization
I
i
only took my laptop Change the capitalization
I
bag
.
Use synonyms
Furthermore
, the Linking Words
bag
which I want you to look for is Use synonyms
little
in size but weights twelve pounds, it is in black colour, it Correct word choice
small
appear
as a box with side straps, it has Xbox a gaming console inside which Correct subject-verb agreement
appears
also
looks similar to Linking Words
small
white box, it Correct article usage
a small
also
contains red wireless remote controller and couple of cords.
Linking Words
Therefore
, I would like to request your staff to find my Linking Words
bag
in Use synonyms
same
condition as it was before and send it to my hotel where I am staying till next week, as Change the article
the same
i
have to attend Change the capitalization
I
business
seminar on coming Add an article
a business
the business
monday
Change the capitalization
Monday
,
and have nothing to do till Remove the comma
apply
weekend
, that was the reason why Add an article
the weekend
i
bought my game with me. Thanking you and hoping for your kind cooperation.
yours Faithfully,
JackChange the capitalization
I
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task achievement
Make sure to proofread your letter to correct spelling mistakes, such as 'carring' to 'carrying' and 'appear' to 'appears'.
coherence and cohesion
Try to group related ideas together in paragraphs. For instance, describe your experience first, then the bag, and finally your request.
coherence and cohesion
Use a more formal closing, such as 'Yours sincerely,' instead of 'yours Faithfully'.
task achievement
You clearly explained what happened and provided details about your bag, which is good.
task achievement
Your message is polite and your request is clear, showing good tone.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite