You are organizing a birthday party for a friend. Write a letter to another friend inviting them to the party. In your letter: tell your friend about the occasion give the date, time, and location of the party mention what you are planning to do at the party

Dear Harp, I am writing

this

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letter to invite you for

special

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a special

the special

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occasion.

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, I believe you will be aware

about

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that

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the birthday of Jass is approaching soon. I am organizing a grand party to celebrate her birthday because

last

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year she surprised me by planning a dinner event for my whole family. I am hosting

this

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celebration as a returning gift for her.

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, the event will be taking place on the 13th

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of june

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june

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June

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at Kawality Sweets because it is the most highly rated restaurant in the city. I have booked the banquet hall for the evening and the party will start at 6 pm.

Moreover

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, I have ordered a big cake which will have a printed photo of her. I was thinking

to give

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of giving

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her a dress as

present

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a present

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for

the

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their

her

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birthday but I am not aware of her size

that is

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why I chose to buy an

iphone

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iPhone

for her.

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, there will be a dance performance

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the end. I hope you will be on time for

this

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precious moment. Yours lovingly, Karan

dhaliwalkaran526Tue Jun 03 2025

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coherence and cohesion

Use a clearer introduction, explaining the occasion at the start.

coherence and cohesion

Add a concluding sentence to wrap up the letter and encourage a response.

task achievement

Make sure to check grammar and spelling for small errors.

task achievement

The letter has a nice warm tone, making it friendly and inviting.

task achievement

You included important details like the date, time, and location well.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

179 words

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Some people prefer the lifestyle and activities offered when living in a cold environment. Others prefer a hot environment. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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