03 June 2025, The graph below gives information about the preferred leisure activities of Australian children.

03 June 2025, The graph below gives information about the preferred leisure activities of Australian children.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for 03 June 2025, The graph below gives information about the preferred leisure activities of Australian children.
The bar chart depicts the percentage of the preferred leisure activities between girls and boys aged 5 to 14 in Australia.
Overall
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, watching TV or videos was the most preferred option
in
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both
gender
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.
On the other hand
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, boys had higher percentages in the three different categories,
while
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girls
only
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higher in the
art
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arts
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and
craft
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crafts
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activity. The most common option in five different leisure activities was watching TV or videos,
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for 100% both in
males
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and females. The percentage of
males
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spent
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who spent
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time playing electronic or computer games stood at 80%, 20% higher than that of females.
Similarly
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, in the bike riding activity, the proportion of
males
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also
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larger than the opposite sex, with less than 80% compared to nearly 60%. Meanwhile, skateboarding or rollerblading became the least common option for both sexes, at around 40% and 22% with
males
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leading the share. As opposed to
this
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, girls spent time in the
art
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arts
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and
craft
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crafts
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twice as much as
that
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of
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boys, with nearly 60% and roughly 30%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words males with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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