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The diagram shows how Liverton docks have changed since 1980

The diagram shows how Liverton docks have changed since 1980
The provided diagram shows the changes
of
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in
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 Liverton docks since 1980.
Overall
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, the docks
has
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have
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 undergone significant changes with the construction of recreational, educational and
residental
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residential
 amenities at the expense of logistics and transportation facilities. Regarding the northern bank of the
river
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, in 1980 there were a lot of warehouses and
creanes
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cranes
creates
, but the warehouses have been replaced by
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an aducational
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aducational
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educational
 centre, and cranes have been removed to make room for a new
sailling
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sailing
 club. In the
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river
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river,
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 many transportation facilities are cleared to make room for the new ship museum. A new bridge and flood barrier are built in the east of the
river
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 to support people.
Turnin
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Turning
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 to the southern bank, there
were
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was
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 a crane and a warehouse in 1980, but now a crane is transformed into a hotel, and the new
appartments
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apartments
 are added. Next to them is a new parking area. There is a new
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river walk
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riverwalk
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 that goes along the
river
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 bank.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words river with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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