The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.

The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.
The bar chart gives information about the changes in
five
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different
countries
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average house
prices
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between 1990 and 2002, which is
also
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compared with the
prices
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in 1989.
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, in the first
five
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years
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, three cities out of
five
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were under zero per
cent
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,yet it changed in the following
years
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, when all the
prices
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increased except for Tokyo, Japan, where it remained negative
five
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per
cent
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.
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whereas
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London, UK, peaked from around -8 percant to almost 13percant
at the end
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of the given
years
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.
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, from 1990 to 1995, the average house costs in New York, Tokyo, and London were significantly low, except for Madrid and Frankfurt, where they reached around 3 and 4 per
cent
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respectively.
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, between the
years
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1996 to 2002, the average house
prices
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had raised
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rose
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dramatically, particularly in London, where the price changed from a negative eight
per
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cent
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to around 13% in 2002, followed by New York with a
5per
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5 per
cent
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increase .
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Tokyo slightly changed to -5% in the
last
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six
years
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 82%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words five, prices, years, cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "gives" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • suburb
  • metropolitan
  • trend
  • appreciation
  • depreciation
  • residential market
  • housing bubble
  • real estate
  • economic factors
  • urbanization
  • infrastructure development
  • property value
  • inflation-adjusted
  • comparative analysis
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