The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.

The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.
The bar chart illustrates the changes in five different
countries
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countries'
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average house
prices
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between 1990 and 2002, which
also
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compared
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compares
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houses
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house
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prices
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in 1989.
Overall
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, in the periods between 1990 and 1995 ,New York ,
Tokyo
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, and London were under zero
percent
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per cent
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. All the
prices
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changed in the following
years
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.
However
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, in the
years
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of
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apply
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1996 and 2002
Tokyo
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was the only city remained negative numbers.
Firstly
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, from 1990 to 1995, the average of the house
prices
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were significantly low in New York(-5%) ,
Tokyo
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(-8%), and London(-8%).
By contrast
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, Madrid and Frankfurt comprised
the
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percentage less than 5%.
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,London witnessed
the
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a
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dramatically changed
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dramatic change
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from-8
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from 8
% to 13%
at the end
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of the given
years
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.
As well as
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New York has a 10%increased from-5%.The segment of Madrid slightly increased from 3% to 4%.
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, Frankfurt decreased to nearly 1%in 2002. Ultimately,
Tokyo
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still stood at the negative number -5%
at the end
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go the
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years
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year
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end, by contrast".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words prices, tokyo, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • suburb
  • metropolitan
  • trend
  • appreciation
  • depreciation
  • residential market
  • housing bubble
  • real estate
  • economic factors
  • urbanization
  • infrastructure development
  • property value
  • inflation-adjusted
  • comparative analysis
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