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positive effects far outweigh those of high living

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in their fundamental activities;

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using a cutting-edge

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enhances the felling convenient of dwellers.

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tend to not worry about a vast amount of

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to traffic cognitions, leading their

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popular around the world, the

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of each person will be more convenient. What

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greenhouse and air pollution which

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fuel machines are a precondition. Indeed, the sustainable project of almost

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plant areas which can ameliorate

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the burden resolve around pollution.

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way to phase out the bad conditions

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is significantly expensive which

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financial tremendous for general populaces.

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the fact of producing renewable energy requires a myriad of constant

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it might increase the tax for people.

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still be a deterrent for general

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from adapting. In conclusion,

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a main disadvantage of smart

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far outweigh these drawbacks