The maps below show a public park (Grange Park) when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show a public park (Grange Park) when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show a public park (Grange Park) when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps compare the changes that have occurred to Grange
Park
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from 1920 when it first opened to the present time.
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, there were several features that have been moved, but the main change is the development of the amphitheatre, water feature, children’s play area and the removal of the fountain.
To begin
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, in efforts to make more accessibility, the two original entrances located on Arnold Avenue and Eldon Street are still kept with an addition of another entrance from the underground car
park
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through Eldon Street. The seats which were
initially
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set around the edges of the
park
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have been concentrated on the central
park
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feature encircling a rose garden after the demolishment of the fountain in that area.
Moreover
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, the two other rose gardens which were located next to Arnold Avenue’s entrance and at the north-west of the
park
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have been demolished. A huge development in the entertainment space has taken place, in which the stage for musicians has been upgraded to an enormous amphitheatre for concerts.
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, having been converted into a children’s play area and a cafe, the pond for water plants is now gone. A water feature has now been added to the south-east of the
park
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replacing the glasshouse.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words park with synonyms.
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