Science is beneficial for society, so science students should get more support. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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science
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has several benefits for
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the community
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,
therefore
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the
student
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students
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studying
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get extra assistance.Nowadays,
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science
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is bringing new technology to the world .I totally agree with the statement and will explore the reasons .
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, the world is
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by
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apply
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technology
such
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as
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the internet
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and intranet,
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and most
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of the communication
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through the internet .
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, it makes family bonding stronger; so that they can chat
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on WhatsApp
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and Facebook,
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and through
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social media people can interact with their loved ones.
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,
this
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helps them to support each of them those who
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away from
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the community
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.
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,
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society
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interest
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to
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in
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online shopping ,so that they don't have to spend time outside,and
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,it helps
community
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the community
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to select
variety
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a variety
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of things to choose
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from as
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they like it.
An
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addition,
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science
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brings new
innovation
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innovations
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as a result
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reasearch
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research
develops ,and
invent
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invents
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new medications for new diseases.
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,in 2020
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Covid 19
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spread
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pandemilcally
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endemically
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many people
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globally . After
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the medicine it came to control .I believe
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was
on
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apply
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,
y
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happened by
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.
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I support that the
student
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students
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who studying
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need to get more help from
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the government
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. In Conclusion, the world is engaged with
lot
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a lot
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of technology and
science
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.
nowadays
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,
the
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people
unable
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are unable
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to live without
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the internet
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or telecommunications. The
science
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is essential to live a normal life .
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the pupil
need
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needs
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to be supported to study
science
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.

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Include specific examples to strengthen your points.
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Your introduction clearly states your agreement with the statement.
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You made relevant points about technology and its impact on society.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • science
  • beneficial
  • support
  • society
  • health
  • technologies
  • innovation
  • environment
  • pollution
  • climate change
  • education
  • critical thinking
  • problems
  • solutions
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