Due to many human activities animal's and plants' life is in danger. Some think that this cannot be changed. Some think that government should do something. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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huge risk as

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behaviors.

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it is a commonly held belief that the change cannot be fixed,

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some individuals

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it. In

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essay, I will discuss both

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of view and give my opinion. On one hand,

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of the nation believes that the change has already

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its consequences.

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animals are in danger of extinction.

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the rivers

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resulted in water pollution and local

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nature in order to avoid

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harmful activities.

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society's knowledge about the significant natural changes

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our planet.

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having different views, I tend to believe that it is the

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natural life.

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Make sure to clearly state your opinion in the introduction and conclusion.

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You have a good attempt at discussing both sides of the argument.

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Your ideas are relevant to the topic.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

215 words

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