The maps show the outskirts of the town of Fosbury in 1980 and 2015. Summarize information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps show the outskirts of the town of Fosbury in 1980 and 2015. Summarize information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps show the outskirts of the town of Fosbury in 1980 and 2015. Summarize information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps demonstrate the changes
occurred
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in the area far from the city of Fosbury from 1980 to 2015.
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, significant modifications include the development of amenities
such
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as car parking areas, a sports centre and a supermarket.
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, to ensure easy access to all the facilities, the motorways are formed that are interconnected to each other with roundabouts. In 1980, the southwest part of the suburb was occupied by tennis courts.
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, the location was utilised by a sports centre and parking in 2015.
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, in the west, there was a park and next to it, on the right, there was a piece of land that was vacant.
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, the former has been replaced by houses with terraces and the latter is used as a public park.
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, in the north direction, there were houses and hotels,with a road in between which is similar in 2015 as well. The part of the area, in the northeast direction, on which terraced houses were formed in 1980 has been converted into
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car park and a grocery market.
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, in the southeast, there were unused fields in the past which were
consequently
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utilised for establishing warehouses in 2015.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urban development
  • rural layout
  • open spaces
  • housing areas
  • infrastructure
  • residential areas
  • road networks
  • commercial areas
  • economic growth
  • green spaces
  • urban expansion
  • public amenities
  • community development
  • demolished
  • renovated
  • modernization process
  • transportation infrastructure
  • landscape modification
  • environmental conservation
  • preservation
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