You recently read an article in the newspaper about someone whom you know personally but have not heard from in a long time. You found that some of the information published was incorrect. Write a letter to editor to inform him about it. In your letter, ● state what the article is about ● mention the error(s) ● describe what you expect from the editor

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to offer a suggestion regarding an

article

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in the newspaper

whom

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that

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I know personally. The

article

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was titled 'Local Businessman

creates impacts

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Creates Impacts

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on the

community

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Community

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' and it well

state

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states

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that

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apply

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how that person's personal life and achievements. I have noticed that there was a significant error I found, which seems to be causing inconvenience to many people, and

hence

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I wanted to bring

this

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to your attention. The

article

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states that the person has a Ph.D. from New York University, but actually, he achieved his doctorate

form

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from

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Brooklyn University.

This

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situation could be improved if you make proper

correction

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This

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article

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will reach

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apply

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many people in our society. It will provide false information, and

this

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can decrease the confidence and reputation among the people about your newspapers. I hope you will consider my concern and take

necessary

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the necessary

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actions to make the correction. I look forward to seeing improvements in the near future. Yours faithfully, Adam

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Jun 6, 2025

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Make sure to clearly state how you know the person in the introduction to connect better with the reader.

coherence and cohesion

Use paragraph breaks to separate different ideas, like stating the error and your expectation.

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Consider using a more formal tone, such as 'I would like to point out' instead of 'I found' for better clarity.

task achievement

You clearly identify the article and the error you found, which shows good understanding of the task.

coherence and cohesion

Your closing statement politely requests action, which is a nice touch to your letter.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

161 words

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