It is a natural process that animal species such as dinosaurs become extinct. There is no reason for people to prevent this from happening. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is no denying the fact that the
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of the
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has natural causes and some natural
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, I
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believe there is nothing we can do to stop it from happening, and I strongly agree with
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essay .
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with , there are some animal
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that are naturally extinct
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as
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and we can'
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prevent it because of their genes the second reason is they
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survive ,
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handle the world's changes , or
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be more flexible , for instances, there was a study published in 1997 , by bbc about
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extinction
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it was mention that the big cause of
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extinction
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it was
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nitro hitting the earth and
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handle to survive like other animal spices like tiger or lion
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, about the second cause of animal
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, there are no longer females in the same
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which leads to the
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of their kind
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, there were kind of penguin and their kind extent for no longer they were females to continue their gens .
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, there are some
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that continue to live in our world by surviving and passing their genes to other animals,
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, the husky dog is the result of 2 different
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, a wolf and a dog and
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a good example of how to surviving and not extinct by natural causes In conclusion , I believe that we can'
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do a lot to prevent some
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from extinct but we can help them move their gene to another animal to survive .

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Make sure your introduction clearly states your position and summarizes the main points.
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Use clear topic sentences for each paragraph to help guide the reader.
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Provide more specific examples and explanations for your points.
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Make sure your conclusion summarizes your main ideas and reinforces your position clearly.
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You express a clear agreement with the statement, which is good for showing your opinion.
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You provide some interesting examples that relate to animal extinction.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • extinction
  • biodiversity
  • ecosystem
  • natural selection
  • evolution
  • environmental changes
  • endangered species
  • conservation
  • habitat destruction
  • ecological balance
  • genetic diversity
  • responsibility
  • accelerate
  • species adaptation
  • butterfly effect
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