The chart below shows what Anthropology gradutes from one university did after finishing their undergradute degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

The chart below shows what Anthropology gradutes from one university did after finishing their undergradute degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows what Anthropology gradutes from one university did after finishing their undergradute degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.
The pie chart illustrates the career path of Anthropology
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after graduation,
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the table shows how much salary they got in
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after five years.
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, the majority of
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went into full-time
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after graduation and the least chosen by
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was part-time
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with postgrad study.
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, half of the graduates who
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government sector gained the highest salary after five years.
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the pie chart, more than half of
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worked full-time jobs (52%) after graduation. A
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15% continued with part-time
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and another 12% remained unemployed among these
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. Meanwhile, both part-time
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with postgrad study together only 5%. Full-time postgrad study and
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which not know what they did after university were the same (8%). The table shows that 40% of freelance consultants and 50% of government sector employees earned over $100,000 after five years of
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only 5% of individuals in each of these categories received the lowest salary range of $25,000–$49,999. Anthropologists who chose private companies divided nearly the same among all types of salaries except 25000-49999$ with only 10%. The 50000-74999, 750000-99999 and 100000+ were 35%, 35% and 30% respectively.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words students, work with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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