You have just spent a weekend at a friend's house. When you returned home, you discovered that you had left a coat there. There are some important belongings in the pockets. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain that you have left the coat there say what the coat looks like, where you think you left it and what was in the pockets make some suggestions about how to get all of your belongings back

Dear Loly,

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my dear friend! I hope you’re doing well. I’m writing to thank you for yesterday and to tell you something important. I really enjoyed spending time with you, It was

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a lovely evening! I’d love to meet your family again soon maybe next time at my place.

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, I have a small issue, I just realized I left my coat at your house It looks like a golden pink coat with pockets and buttons, I’m quite sure I left it on the sofa in your living room,

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in my coat pockets there is my wallet inside it my credit card, driver’s license, and some money. I suggest if you are going to the university tomorrow, I can meet you in the classes or in the cafeteria, I am waiting for your response If you will attend tomorrow or not. Thank you for everything. kind regards, Lulu

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coherence and cohesion

Try to group similar ideas together in the same paragraph. This will help your letter flow better.

task response

Make sure to express your thoughts clearly and fully. You missed some details about getting your coat back.

tone

Your greeting and closing are warm and friendly, which is great for a letter to a friend.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

151 words

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appreciation
accidentally
distinctive features
fabric
inner/outer pockets
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