The plans below show the layout of a university’s sports center now, and how it will look after redevelopment.

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the existing layout of a university’s
sports
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centre and the redevelopment plans
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the future.
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, it is apparent that the indoor area will be significantly expanded by replacing the outdoor courts with an indoor area
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functions,
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, pool, studios, and additional services. In the present map, starting from the South of the
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centre, there is a reception in front of the gate. Behind it, we can see a 25-meter pool in the centre of the arena, which is surrounded by
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seating in the East, a changing room in the West, and a gym in the North. Outside the central structure, there are 2 outdoor courts, one on the eastern
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and the other on the western
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. In the future plans, the existing indoor area will not be rebuilt massively, except for expanding the gym to the East. On the eastern
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, the outdoor court will be replaced by a new
sports
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hall next to the seating and 2 dance studios in the East of that hall. On the western
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, the court will be transformed into a large leisure pool.
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, there will be 2 new changing rooms located in the corner in the Southeast and Southwest.
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, near the entrance, there will be a cafe situated to the East of the reception and a
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shop to the West.

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Coherence and Cohesion
Try to provide a clearer introduction by summarizing both maps briefly before going into details.
Coherence and Cohesion
Make sure to clearly conclude by summarizing the key changes. This will give a clearer end to your essay.
Task Achievement
Add more details to explain why the new features are beneficial for the users of the sports center.
Task Achievement
You have described the current layout and future plans clearly, showing the changes in the sports center effectively.
Coherence and Cohesion
Your use of connecting words makes the reading flow logically from one point to another.

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