In many countries today, if people want to find work, they have to move away from their friends and their families. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

There is an ongoing trend that people need to move away from their hometowns and be dispatched from their own friends and families

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if they want to obtain higher salaries.

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trend can be seen not just in developing countries but

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in developed countries. In

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and

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worldwide tendency and explain why I believe that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

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with, from a pragmatic viewpoint, there are several

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brought by moving to urban areas alone to find jobs.

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is simply because of the number of opportunities in

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, in Japan, younger generations are more likely to leave

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rural areas

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the lack of

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willing to pay higher salaries.

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, by going to large

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as Tokyo, Osaka and Kobe, they can easily find preferable job offers that the wages are comparatively higher.

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, going away from their original places and living alone in large

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for higher earnings are rational decisions, and the

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brought by doing so are practical because by making more money, their own economic choices will be wider, and they will be able to support their families and friends financially

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, some people counterargue by citing various potential

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trend. These disadvantages are mainly that family members or friends left in the countryside struggle with decreasing

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and that the scarcity of workers

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leads to financial burdens on themselves. Certainly,

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problematic chain is currently happening in Japanese rural areas, and regional governments sometimes have no choice but

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them by providing money.

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true that if those

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people can be more patient and accept that some members of them move to

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to earn, the total

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long-lasting and more meaningful because if they could find optimal jobs there, they would be able to send money to remaining residents.

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, the entire rural society can flourish

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, so the

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will outweigh the

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from a wider perspective. In conclusion, though several short-lasting disadvantages can arise

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the temporary lack of workers, the total advantages are notable and long-lasting.

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worldwide tendency will

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outweigh the

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