The table and charts belows gives information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and charts show how it was distributed

The table and charts belows gives information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and charts show how it was distributed
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table and charts belows gives information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and charts show how it was distributed
The table and two pie charts provide key information about the
budget
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for the police department in one single area of the UK from 2017 to 2018. The units are measured in percentage and millions
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, it is clear from the table that the majority of the money comes from the government in both years.
In addition
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, the
budget
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that comes from the local taxes increased in 2018.
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, the income of the police that get from other sources was almost the same for both years.
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what is shown in the graph, the dominant part is that the police spend most of the
budget
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which is salaries for the staff and officers, so more than half of the money is spent there.
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, for technology that percentage increased slightly to 14 per cent in 2018.
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, in 2017
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the percentage
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was 8 per cent In terms of building and transport, the spending did not change for
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sector, and they 17 per cent of the
budget
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words budget with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • budget allocation
  • funding sources
  • national government
  • local taxes
  • expenditure
  • salaries
  • equipment
  • operational costs
  • economic growth
  • inflation
  • governmental policy
  • budget distribution
  • spending priorities
  • technology investment
  • staffing costs
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