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7 June 2025, The table shows the percentage of journeys made by different forms of transport in four countries, The bar graph shows the results of a survey into car use.

7 June 2025, The table shows the percentage of journeys made by different forms of transport in four countries, The bar graph shows the results of a survey into car use.
The table depicts the proportion of transportation used in four nations and the bar chart illustrates the percentage of reasons
people
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used
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use
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car
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cars
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 in
Canada
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.
Overall
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, cars
was
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 the most common option for travelling in four countries. Meanwhile, in
Canada
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, the
most
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apply
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reason
people
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 decided
travel
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to travel
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 to work by car
because
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was because
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 there was no other alternative. Car usage in four countries had the largest share compared to other modes, with more than half in
Canada
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 (90%), Belgium (72%), and Germany (68%). Meanwhile, riding bikes was the least common option in these countries, with less than 5%.
However
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, in
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the Netherland
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Netherland
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Netherlands
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, it became the second most
mode
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common mode
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 after cars (47%), at 26%. Pedestrians in
Canada
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 made up just
by
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5%, followed by
people
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 who used public transport at 3%.
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, an equal amount of 11% pedestrians was recorded in Belgium and Germany,
whereas
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the Netherland
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Netherland
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Netherlands
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 shared 18%.
People
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 who used public transport in Germany stood at 18%, 4% higher than Belgium and 10% higher than
Netherland
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Netherlands
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. Regarding the reasons
of
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apply
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Canadians
used
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use
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 cars, nearly 40% of them said because no alternative and 30% said it
needs
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is needed
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 for work.
Moreover
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, comfort was
also
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 a reason, accounting for just above 20%, which was twice as much as quicker.
While
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 only around 8% of Canadians said it was because of work nightshift.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, canada with synonyms.
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