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Writing Samples
Band 3

Some people think that planting trees in open spaces in cities and towns is more important than building houses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

From my point of
veiw
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view
 planting
trees
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 important as
much
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as building
houses
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, both
of
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apply
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theme
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them
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has
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have
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 an impact on
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people
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people's
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 lives
for example
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haveing
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having
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 a lot of
trees
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 effected on nature, oxagen, temruture even
on
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apply
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people
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people's
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 mood
some times
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sometimes
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,
i
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I
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 believe hote wither has a bad
imbact
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impact
 on a lot of
people
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 mood and i could say that becouse i am one of them, hote wither get me into bad mood and some times i am having angure issue becouse of that. If you are
liveing
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living
 in a hote
city
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 like
i
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I
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 do in Riyadh the capital
city
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 of Saudi Arabia you are
goning
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going
 to know how much it is important to
planting
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plant
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 a lot of
trees
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 in the streets or inside of your house. All of that does not mean building
houses
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it
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is not important,
people
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 usually
lives
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live
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 in
a
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houses
a house
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houses
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espisily
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especially
 if you are living in a capital
city
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 like Riyadh, most
of
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apply
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people
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 used to live in
housess
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houses
 not a
carvan
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car
 or
apartmint
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apartment
i
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I
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dont
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don't
 know what is the real
reasone
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reason
behaind
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behind
 that, but
mabye
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maybe
 a good
econmy
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economy
 in the
city
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 could be the
reasone
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reason
.
Last
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 but not least
i
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I
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 believe if you want to live a good life, a life with good
qulity
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quality
 you should live in a
city
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 that has
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a balince
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balince
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balance
 between building
houses
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 and
trees
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bothe
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both
 of theme important for a great
live
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life
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coherence
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cohesion
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task achievement
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idea
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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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