Older
people
are no less than a treasure with immense knowledge and experiences . Some Use synonyms
people
have a notion that they should work in their old age but Use synonyms
other
oppose the statement and Fix the agreement mistake
others
says
they should not be involved in any activity. I personally believe that Correct subject-verb agreement
say
the
senior citizens have some job duties to accomplish. I will discuss both views in the following paragraphs.
To commence with, the senior citizens have a plethora of information and they can share their experiences with the younger employees to Correct article usage
apply
enhances
their knowledge and make a friendly and Wrong verb form
enhance
cozy
relationship with them .Change the spelling
cosy
Moreover
, the company can use them as an asset for Linking Words
the
profit and will reach the heights of success Correct article usage
apply
as a result
the older Linking Words
people
will get Use synonyms
bonus
as a reward. Add an article
a bonus
the bonus
For instance
, as per the survey, more than 30% Linking Words
old
age Change preposition
of old
people
are working in the government sector.
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On the other hand
, some Linking Words
people
think it is a burden to continue a job because some Use synonyms
job
are physically demanding Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
hence
, Linking Words
the
older Correct article usage
apply
people
are not able to cope Use synonyms
up
Change preposition
apply
due to
their medical conditions. The senior citizens feel lethargic and exhausted after a few working hours Linking Words
and
has Correct word choice
which
a detrimental effects
on their Correct the article-noun agreement
a detrimental effect
detrimental effects
overall
health. Linking Words
For instance
, as per the Linking Words
BBC
a person Add a comma
BBC,
rushed
to the hospital Add a missing verb
is rushed
due to
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heart
attack because of Correct article usage
a heart
the
work pressure.
Correct article usage
apply
To conclude
, Linking Words
i
believe that if Change the capitalization
I
the
older Correct article usage
apply
people
work they will have a source of income and a company from their colleagues Use synonyms
thus
they cannot feel isolated.Linking Words
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