The maps below show the changes in the art gallery's ground floor in 2005 and the present day. Summarize the information by selecting the main features, and make comparisons.

The maps below show the changes in the art gallery's ground floor in 2005 and the present day. Summarize the information by selecting the main features, and make comparisons.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show the changes in the art gallery's ground floor in 2005 and the present day. Summarize the information by selecting the main features, and make comparisons.
The given diagrams illustrate the difference between art
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gallery
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galleries
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in 2005 and the present day.
Overall
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, it has shifted from where just fully used for exhibition into a place
that is
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suitable for all age groups.
Additionally
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, 2 entrance steps of
this
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gallery
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have been untouched over the period.
To begin
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, on the right side of
this
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gallery
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, all 3 large exhibition rooms have been unchanged ,
while
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the vicinity had some disparity,
such
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as the reception desk and entrance hall, both of which relocated to each other. In terms of the reception desk,
it
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had been rebuilt from a square size to a circle shape. In the corner of the entrance hall, the area next to the stairs to the upper floor added a lift and an empty place. Taking a look at the remaining places,
while
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the cafe and shop have not been untouched, the
gallery
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office and large exhibition room have transformed into new temporary exhibitions and a children's area, which acts as a way to attract more groups of visitors
such
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as children.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such, while".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words gallery with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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