The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.

The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.
The given bar chart illustrates the proportion of
Asian
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in
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two genders who
were
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passed the driving
test
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from 1980 until 2010.
Overall
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, both males and females saw an increase in the
percent
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of passed the driving
test
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.
Additionally
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, more
woman
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women
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were likely to pass the
test
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than males throughout
4-year
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the 4-year
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period. With regards to the gender where driving tests passed
were
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predominated the timeframe. In 1980, nearly 50% of
woman
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women
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could pass the
test
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, which
were
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tended to increase to just under 70% in the next 20 years.
However
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, the woman's driving exam passed declined to about
uunder
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under
65% by 2010. Moving to the remaining gender which saw
less
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people
passed
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the
test
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. During 1980, approximately 29% of people
passed
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who passed
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the
test
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were made up prior to rising significantly to almost 50%.
This
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location was where the percentage of people who passed the
test
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levelled-off
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levelled off
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at
abbout
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about
49% until the end of the period.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words test with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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