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In the future, nobody will buy printed books or newspapers because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.To what extent, do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In the predictable days, almost everyone will be able to read all
things
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 they want
through
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online for free
instead
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consume
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 printed publishers or
newspapers
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. It has some advantages like accessing a book from everywhere with its plot and downloading online versions of it in a short period without going to stores. l absolutely agree with
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 tendency in order to its benefits. In
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 of the accessible function
of
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it
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, online resources especially
Internet
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the Internet
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 give a chance to search and find all possible results related to
books
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 for
readers
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. When individuals reach their needs on the browser, they may focus
just
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on just
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book’s
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the book’s
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 plot or full topic.
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, printed publishers and
newspapers
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 have a few
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 now and it will continue in the future. Because everyone wants to see all possible choices immediately at their workplaces and houses.
Therefore
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, online platforms
such
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 as social media pages and websites provide broad opportunities for their customers,
as a result
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, people can easily get
books
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 or
newspapers
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 without paying. To illustrate
this
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, in Azerbaijan, all students who cannot afford to buy a book read all PDF versions of
books
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 from Google and Yandex.
Moreover
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, online platforms
also
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 have a necessary offer to all
readers
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, including: downloading
books
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’ files and summaries. Some enthusiastic individuals try to download their
favorite
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books
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 to their phones and do not carry physical
books
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 with them. It means that PDF
books
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 almost stay permanent with their
readers
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 but physical
books
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 may be exploited for a long period.
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,
this
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 method supports saving
of
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money and reading more
books
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 without paying.
For example
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, based on a report by Google, approximately 60% of browser users imported
books
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 to their computers from Chrome
last
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 year. In conclusion,
although
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newspapers
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 and printed
books
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 were big sources for
readers
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 in
the
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previous years, everyone now prefers to use online versions of publishers without paying money. Because touchless
books
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 have positive aspects like access from anywhere and download all of them immediately.
Therefore
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,
this
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 trend will continue in the future.

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task achievement
Try to clearly state your main idea in the introduction. Make it clear whether you agree or disagree and give a brief reason.
coherence and cohesion
Make sure your paragraphs have clear main ideas and support them with details. Avoid introducing new ideas in the conclusion.
coherence and cohesion
Use linking words to connect your ideas better, such as 'firstly', 'however', and 'for example'.
task achievement
You presented good ideas about the benefits of online reading. Your points about accessibility and cost were relevant.
task achievement
Your examples, like students in Azerbaijan reading PDF versions, added value to your essay.

Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:

...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • printed books
  • newspapers
  • online reading
  • digital content
  • paywall
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-saving
  • environmental impact
  • traditional reading experience
  • ownership
  • personal connection
  • reliability
  • credibility
  • digital divide
  • accessibility issues
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