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The table below shows the amount of waste production (in million tonnes) in six different countries over twenty years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the amount of waste production (in million tonnes) in six different countries over twenty years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The
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table
 graph illustrates
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the
 amount of
waste
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production
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 , measured in million tonnes, over three decades in several countries : Ireland, Japan, Korea, Poland, Portugal and the USA.
Overall
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, the amount
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 produced in the USA was the highest throughout the entire period,
while
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 Ireland had the lowest level compared to other countries. The
waste
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 materials in the USA rose significantly , starting at 131 million tonnes in the initial period and ending at 192 million tonnes in 2000. In
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Japan
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, the
production
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 of
waste
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 increased during the whole period.
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, in Poland and Portugal ,
the
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waste
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production
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 grew slightly. Korea did not produce any debris in 1980, and Ireland
also
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 showed no
production
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 in 1990.
However
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 , the
waste
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productes
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products
 in
korea
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Korea
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 declined to nearly half between 1990 and 2000.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, production with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • fluctuate
  • sharp rise
  • decline
  • stable
  • notable
  • peak
  • dip
  • consistent
  • variation
  • contrast
  • comparison
  • aggregate
  • metric
  • figure
  • volume
  • statistics
  • data points
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