The pie charts
illustrates
the data on three age groups of the citizens of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
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illustrate
It is clear that
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,
Yemen had the largest Remove the comma
apply
number
of young people and the lowest Use synonyms
number
of old people. In the far Use synonyms
future
the percentage of children will increase to over half and youths will decrease. Italy had the biggest figure Add a comma
future,
of
new generations but the percentage Change preposition
for
expected
to Add a missing verb
is expected
fill
down in 2050.
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fall
To begin
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with
the proportion of age groups 15-59 was the highest in Yemen at around 50 per Add a comma
with,
cent
. Use synonyms
While
the Linking Words
number
will suddenly Use synonyms
declined
to almost 37% in 2050. In 2000, the Change the verb form
decline
aged
group from 0 to 14 was 46 per Replace the word
age
cent
and Use synonyms
group
aged Add an article
the group
from
60+ was the smallest circle at just 3 per Change preposition
apply
cent
. In 2050, older individuals will slightly Use synonyms
growth
to 5.7 per Replace the word
grow
cent
Use synonyms
while
children will increase dramatically to 57 Linking Words
percent
.
In 2000, the largest circle was aged groups 15-59 at 61 per Change the spelling
per cent
cent
. Use synonyms
Whereas
the lowest percentage was people from 60 and over at 14.3 per Linking Words
cent
. In 2050, the expected Use synonyms
number
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for
young individuals Change preposition
of
were
46 per Correct subject-verb agreement
was
cent
and the Use synonyms
percentages
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percentage
for
older Change preposition
of
will
be 11.5%.Verb problem
individuals would
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