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Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what type of neighbor is the best to have? •someone who is quiet •someone who we are similar to •someone who is supportive Use specific details and examples in your answer.

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 be considered as another family. They are the ones who are closest to your house and their support matters a lot in
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 an individual's life.
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, I strongly believe that
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 have to be supportive other than all positive traits
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 as quiet, similar to us and our family. To commence with, there are several reasons that bolster my opinion. First of all, in case of any robbery or mishappening at the property during the owner's absence, they are the ones who get to know at first and can report it to the police or the concerned authority immediately in case,
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 owner's phone is not getting connected by any means.
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, an understanding and supportive nature is a must.
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, basic hospitality in case of the arrival of anyone, including social welfare group members,
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 and a delivery guy, is much appreciated by the owners in their absence.
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, other positive features,
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 as quiet
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 a great thing because residing in a peaceful community is a dream of almost everyone looking for a house in any locality.
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 who share the same type of interest are more likely to stay together for a longer time and generate a good sense of understanding quickly. Resulting in a good friendship, which will continue to the upcoming generations. To sum it up, I strongly believe that among all the characteristics,
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 - quiet locality, residents in the area sharing the same type of interest etc.
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 nature is the one
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 most required for a peaceful and developing community
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 the future.

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task achievement
Try to expand your ideas with more specific examples, especially about how supportive neighbors help during emergencies.
coherence and cohesion
Make sure each paragraph has a clear main idea and transitions between sentences to improve flow.
coherence and cohesion
Consider indicating the main points in the introduction and summarizing them in the conclusion for clarity.
task achievement
You have a clear opinion about the type of neighbor that is best.
coherence and cohesion
Your introduction is engaging and sets the tone for the essay.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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