The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates an industrial
area
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and proposed plan of site future development in the town of Norbiton
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, the replacement of
main
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the main
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function of
industrial
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the industrial
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site in Norbiton was planned to be
housing
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a housing
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area
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completed with amusement facilities for
community
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the community
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since it is near to
town
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the town
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. Currently, the manufacture of industry
worked
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works
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as its main goal to produce industrial goods. Constructed in the east of town,
this
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place is surrounded by eight factories along
beside
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apply
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the street, and three of them
located
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in a roundabout. A farmland is built in the north and right after when public cross the river. In the future, the industrial
area
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is set to be housing for residents and facilitated with complete infrastructures
such
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as
playground
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a playground
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, shops, school, and medical centre for their own living. In total, there will be seven housings distributed in wider parts of the site. One housing
area
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will be added in the farmland
area
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that is
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accessible since a bridge will be built connecting it with the main place.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words area with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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