The maps below show the changes that have taken place in Meadowside village and Fonton, a neighbouring town, since 1962.

The maps below show the changes that have taken place in Meadowside village and Fonton, a neighbouring town, since 1962.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show the changes that have taken place in Meadowside village and Fonton, a neighbouring town, since 1962.
The maps illustrate the
depelopment
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development
of
Meadowside
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village and its
neighboring
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town, Fonton, from 1962 to the present.
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, the
meadowise
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meadows
changed to improve transport
facilites
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facilities
and villages expanded significantly over the final year, almost
everythings
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everything
changed except
name
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the name
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the
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of the
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Fonton and some main
way
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ways
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for vehicles. In 1962,
Meadowside
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was a small and isolated village located to the west of Fonton, with only one road
connected
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connecting
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them.
by
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1985,
Meadowside
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had started to grow and
first
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the first
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buildings
was
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were
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built
in
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that year on its southwestern side, these changes marked the beginning or urban expansion and connectivity between the
two
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areas. By the present day,
Meadowside
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changed its name to
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the surban
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surban
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urban
area named
Meadowside
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Suburbs.
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Moreover
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two
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villages
finally
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completely united into one island and became
two
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cities. In
additionaly
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addition
, a hotel was built between
two
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cities
its
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apply
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indicating a rise in tourism travel and economic development, even roads and railways
has
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have
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more
type
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types
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of way now.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words meadowside, two with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 4 times.
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