The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year.

The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year.
The table
illustates
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illustrates
the percentage of time that was spent on different
activites
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activities
by the unemployed in the UK
last
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year. and
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, what stands out from the table is that housework, shopping, and job hunting were the most preferred activities.
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, men were more active than women in outdoor activities. Moving to a more detailed analysis, the proportion of males and females in housework accounted for 19% and 49%, respectively in the morning,
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that of the unemployed in shopping was less than 30% in both genders. Men were more active than women in job hunting by 6%, with the latter comprising 16%. With regard to the same action in the afternoon, housing ranked first among women at 21%, which was followed by shopping and visiting friends constituting 17% each,
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men preferred less these activities (under 15%). The percentage of males and females was approximately the same in job hunting and watching TV ranging between 12% and 14%. The figure for
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in gardening was responsible for more than 10% in both morning and afternoon,
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the remaining actions were merely under one-tenth.

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