The chart below shows waste collection by recycling centre from 2011 to 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows waste collection by recycling centre from 2011 to 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows waste collection by recycling centre from 2011 to 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
the bar chart
illustirate
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illustrates
a comparison between 4
diffiernt
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different
type
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types
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of
waste
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collection
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by recycling
center
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centre
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(
paper
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, glass, tins and garden) in the period between 2011 to 2015, measured in
tons
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. overview, it is clear from the chart that
amont
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amount
of
waste
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is
generaly
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generally
increasing
form
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from
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2011 to 2015, especially in
paper
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waste
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.
in
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addition
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mostly in all year
paper
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wastes
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were the most commonly used
while
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the
gardern
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garden
wastes
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were the least used. In
details
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detail
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, 2011,2012 and 2014
show
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similarity
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similarities
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in the
waste
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collections,
paper
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wastes
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waste
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show
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the
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severity of
wastes
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approximatly
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approximately
50
tons
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and above,
then
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there
are
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the
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glass trash were
it
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is
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around 40
tons
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. tins
waste
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present
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presents
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arounds
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around
30
tons
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per each year,
while
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garden
waste
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show
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shows
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the least
amont
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amount
in
waste
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collection
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especialy
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especially
in 2012
where
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when
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gardens
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garden
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waste
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dropped sharply. in 2015,
the
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waste
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collection
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and consumption
is
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increased
dramaticly
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dramatically
,
paper
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waste
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collection
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present
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was
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70
tons
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,
while
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glass
recycilng
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recycling
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show
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showed
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54
tone
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tons
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, collection, paper, tons, wastes, show with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Trend
  • Waste collection
  • Recycling centre
  • Rise
  • Fall
  • Amount/Quantity
  • Comparison
  • Fluctuation
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Anomaly
  • Pattern
  • Data
  • Significant
  • Notable change
  • Regulations
  • Public awareness
  • Local policies
  • Prediction
  • Future trends
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