In many countries, children and teenagers are committing more crimes. Why is this? How should they be punished?

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committing

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was a good environment to improve

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or creativity.

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, criminals began to look for a new environment to commit

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started to be interested in that job.

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continued to

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out over the

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commited

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control and parent’s management. It can not be denied that, with the

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the rate of

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environment for

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to participate in

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activities.

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play an important role in

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’s work, managing their activities,

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to minimize that phenomenon. In conclusion,

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can be a serious trend

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, it can be diminished by

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and parents in controlling

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