"The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020."

"The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020."
IELTS Writing Task Chart for "The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020."
The chart provides key information about the
number
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of participants for a variety of events at one place in Melbourne, Australia between 2000 and 2020.
Overall
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it is clear from the graph that the numbers of attendees for Martial arts fluctuated.
In addition
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, the total count of participants in Amateur dramatics declined over the period.
According to
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what is shown, the participation in the Film club remained relatively stable for 20 lifetimes. The amount of joiners in Martial arts fluctuated over the years.
In contrast
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, the total count of attendees in Amateur Dramatics started at 25 in 2000, and
then
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rose slightly to just under 30, from 2005 until the end of the period, the
number
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of Amateur Dramatics members decreased significantly. As for the
last
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two activities, first of all, for the Table tennis joiners, from 2000 to 2010, the
number
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of joiners stayed steady, and
then
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the participation increased over the next decade to just above 50.
Secondly
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, for the Musical performance activity for the first 5 years, no one joined the Musical performance event, just after 2005 everyone tried to join, and the
number
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grew slightly to around 15 for 15 years.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • participants
  • social centre
  • comparison
  • trends
  • consistently popular
  • gained popularity
  • lost popularity
  • community interest
  • availability of facilities
  • social factors
  • economic factors
  • external events
  • economic downturns
  • health crises
  • demographic changes
  • aging population
  • marketing
  • community outreach programs
  • participation rates
  • Melbourne
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