The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024.

The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024.
The two maps in the photo
shows
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the
village
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of Bunborugh now and plans for the
village
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in the future.
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, we can see the huge change that the
village
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paln
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plans
to do, and it is a good step that every
village
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do that.
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, we can see that in the past there
is
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one main road that goes only to the shops and houses, and there
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was
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fishing
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a fishing
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port in front of the shops, and they do not have any other
transpot
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transport
way
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, only cars, and there is a small beach near to the fishing port.
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Secondly
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we can see the photo that the
village
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plan to
do
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in 2024, the main change we can look at
is
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are
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the
dipartments
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departments
department
, transports, new
high
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highway
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way
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and change
fish
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of fish
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port into a promenade, they
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added
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a long
way
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train around the
village
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and they add two hotels the first one is between the new
way
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and the shops, the second one near to the beach.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words village, way with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • maps
  • village
  • present day
  • plans
  • 2024
  • overview
  • key differences
  • road network
  • infrastructure
  • residential areas
  • recreational spaces
  • impact
  • environment
  • benefits
  • challenges
  • proposed changes
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