Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scintific research, business and the academic world, others believe that some information is too important or to valuable to be shared freely.Discuss both this views and give your own opinion.
,others have their limits about sharing their finds out , in my view , the
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finds out must be shared to get the scintific reserchs their max value.
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task achievement
Make sure to clearly present both views about sharing information. Use clear examples to support each view.
coherence and cohesion
Organize your essay with clear paragraphs. Start with an introduction, then have body paragraphs for each viewpoint, and finish with a conclusion.
coherence and cohesion
Use more linking words to connect your ideas and help the reader follow your thoughts easily.
content
You express a clear opinion about the importance of sharing valuable findings in scientific research.
Include an introduction and conclusion
A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.
The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.
The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:
Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation
Example:
To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported.After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.
Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:
In this technological era, children are so into smartphones and electronic gadgets that they are not physically active anymore. As a result, they have become more obese and the rate of obesity has risen exponentially among children. Hence, kids nowadays could suffer from various illnesses related to obesity. In the following paragraphs, I am going to analyze the root causes and effects of this.
Opinions are divided on whether newly built houses should be designed the same as the old houses in local areas or whether people are free to design their own houses. While I understand the logic behind the former view, I am still in favor of the later.
In this modern-day world, there are a lot of genres of music that are being introduced to us. This is because music simply can help us to express our feelings. Although some international music is getting more recognized by people these days, I personally believe that traditional music holds an important role in showing the country's uniqueness.
One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is the perception that boxing is the most dangerous sport due to the high risk of injury. Many people argue that this sport should cease in the future because of its inherent dangers. However, I completely disagree with this opinion and believe that boxing offers significant benefits for contemporary youth.