Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Countries around the world will be facing significant

challenges

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relating not only to the environment, but

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population

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and

education

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as well, here

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want to write my

oppinion

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opinion

about these

challenges

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that will face

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country

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Education

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an essensial

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essensial

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essential

part of the

country

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, in my

country

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education

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in danger

possition

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position

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FIrstly

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, the reason why

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going to be

most

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challenge

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because

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of the term of the

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goverment

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government

for instance

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the laws about

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education

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are very bad

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as teachers are not

allow

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students homework, 10 hours for school, and many more.

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population

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in Indonesia

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significant

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improve

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since 10 years past, in one family there

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five kids even more,

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conditions

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serious

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challenge in the future. Both

challenges

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education

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and

population

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have to overcome as soon as possible.

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, the problem of

education

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this

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country

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is the law, so the

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goverment

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government

have

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to revise it and match it with the real need of

indonesian

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students.

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, the

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goverment

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government

could revise the curriculum, MERDEKA curriculum

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not match

with

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student needs.

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the other hand,

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population

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the population

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have to be

clear

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as so as possible,

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goverment

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government

have

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educates

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educate

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the people

for

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about whether

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2 kids are enough,

for example

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the goverments

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goverments

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government

can conduct

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socialitation about

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whether 2

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children are enough and

make advertise

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

272 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Sustainability
Ecosystem
Renewable resources
Urbanization
Demographics
Healthcare system
Pension crisis
Curriculum development
Digital literacy
E-learning platforms
Lifelong learning
Public policy
Biodiversity conservation
Green technology
Population density
Generational equity
Economic disparity

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